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Post by Krystedez "Spectrum" on Jul 22, 2004 23:40:22 GMT -5
"Shadows invelope my past. Reincarnation builds my future. Light shines through my darkest hours. Crystal facets pierce through my eyes. You'll see it all, if you want. You'll see that I... have a spectrum of power...
Empathy brings a sort of light to others. So empathy is what I have. An understanding of others A true trust you can't put down. It's anyones dreams to have a friend they can count on.
Sometimes day breaks. Sometimes it falls. A new day re-awakes, my true blue soul and all.. A failure becomes a mystery not a word, not a fuss As long as I have with me My love and my trust. I'll spend days and days, spreading my colors far and wide. An awesome will if you will brings me to hold on forever. what is dear to me inside...
It's what's dear to me... That brings all of us together... To be of greatest power and mind just means you have no care. If you do not use it all wisely, None of it will be fair... So let me say this unto you... What would you do... with a friend you can trust?"
So...whatcha think? I know it isn't an intro, but it's close! ;D
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Post by Truttle on Jul 23, 2004 1:23:53 GMT -5
This is a very good poem! It even rhymes! ;D This is some very good stuff you come up with! Very good stuff!
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Post by Ken'ichi on Jul 23, 2004 10:47:19 GMT -5
Not bad, it's pretty good. It rhymes, pretty good poem Spec. Nice work!
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Post by Krystedez "Spectrum" on Jul 23, 2004 11:42:28 GMT -5
You know what's funny about it? I posted it first on these peach (mario character) boards and it was all done without even stopping. I just kept going and going. It was continuous! So it wasn't that hard, thank god! Anyways, glad you liked it
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Post by Nikiski on Jul 23, 2004 18:45:33 GMT -5
Nice work, Spec!!
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