Post by Koedi on May 12, 2008 15:42:12 GMT -5
I'm trying my hand out at writing Brother Bear Fanfic! Tell me what you think so far!
It's written it first person view of Kenai, just so you know.
Prologue:
It was nighttime and Koda and I were munching on an assortment of berries and fish we had gathered. It was my birthday today. Or rather, it was the celebration of the day I became a bear. We decided to have a guy's night out, so Nita was back at her village, visiting old friends.
I had now survived 2 hibernations and 2 salmon runs with Koda. I still haven't learned how to spot traps from "miles away", nor have I learned how to successfully catch fish. Then again, learning all the tricks of the trade of a bear in 2 years would be pretty difficult for anyone!
"Hey Kenai, you gonna finish that?" I sighed. Koda was a growing cub and shouldn't be denied food, but it was getting kind of annoying.
"Ya I'm finished Koda." I pushed the fish over toward him. "Hey, why don't we get some sleep so we can head out *rested* tomorrow?" He hadn't been able to get any sleep so far. Koda kept having the same nightmare about the Hunters.
I settled him down in a cave we had found by the river and he fell asleep almost instantly. I walked off down the river, thinking about the events that had passed. I still couldn't get over the fact I had killed Koda's mother. He may have forgiven me, but I don't think I could ever forgive myself...
"KENAI!" *Oh, no* I thought. *He must have had that nightmare he's been telling me about.* I started back the way I had come.
*Koda's nightmare*
It was always the same. Koda would wake up and Kenai wouldn't be with him. He called out.
"Kenai! You there?"
Then from the bushes a wolf would burst out and tackle Koda. Grabbing him by the scruff of the neck, the wolf would take him back to his master, who throw Koda into a cage and locked it. Koda then saw Kenai from the bushes, with an arrow inside him...and then he woke up, hyperventilating.
*End of Nightmare*
"KENAI!" His screams sounded more frantic. Hopefully it wasn't anything more than a nightmare.
When I got back to the cave, I found Koda crying. "Kenai...I t-t-thought you had l-l-left m-me..."
"Koda, you know I would never do that!" I pulled him closer to me and nuzzled his cheek. "We're brothers! I'll always be here for you. I promise."
"Pinky-swear?" He wiped his eyes on the back of his paw.
"Pinky-swear." And with the flick of our claws, it was done.
Comments much appreciated!
It's written it first person view of Kenai, just so you know.
Prologue:
It was nighttime and Koda and I were munching on an assortment of berries and fish we had gathered. It was my birthday today. Or rather, it was the celebration of the day I became a bear. We decided to have a guy's night out, so Nita was back at her village, visiting old friends.
I had now survived 2 hibernations and 2 salmon runs with Koda. I still haven't learned how to spot traps from "miles away", nor have I learned how to successfully catch fish. Then again, learning all the tricks of the trade of a bear in 2 years would be pretty difficult for anyone!
"Hey Kenai, you gonna finish that?" I sighed. Koda was a growing cub and shouldn't be denied food, but it was getting kind of annoying.
"Ya I'm finished Koda." I pushed the fish over toward him. "Hey, why don't we get some sleep so we can head out *rested* tomorrow?" He hadn't been able to get any sleep so far. Koda kept having the same nightmare about the Hunters.
I settled him down in a cave we had found by the river and he fell asleep almost instantly. I walked off down the river, thinking about the events that had passed. I still couldn't get over the fact I had killed Koda's mother. He may have forgiven me, but I don't think I could ever forgive myself...
"KENAI!" *Oh, no* I thought. *He must have had that nightmare he's been telling me about.* I started back the way I had come.
*Koda's nightmare*
It was always the same. Koda would wake up and Kenai wouldn't be with him. He called out.
"Kenai! You there?"
Then from the bushes a wolf would burst out and tackle Koda. Grabbing him by the scruff of the neck, the wolf would take him back to his master, who throw Koda into a cage and locked it. Koda then saw Kenai from the bushes, with an arrow inside him...and then he woke up, hyperventilating.
*End of Nightmare*
"KENAI!" His screams sounded more frantic. Hopefully it wasn't anything more than a nightmare.
When I got back to the cave, I found Koda crying. "Kenai...I t-t-thought you had l-l-left m-me..."
"Koda, you know I would never do that!" I pulled him closer to me and nuzzled his cheek. "We're brothers! I'll always be here for you. I promise."
"Pinky-swear?" He wiped his eyes on the back of his paw.
"Pinky-swear." And with the flick of our claws, it was done.
Comments much appreciated!