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Post by kiriu on Mar 11, 2006 16:37:09 GMT -5
OOC: OK. That's everything for today in this topic. I will write something tommorow.
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Post by nadine on Mar 11, 2006 18:49:52 GMT -5
So far, so good. Great job Kiriu.
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Post by kiriu on Mar 12, 2006 0:54:25 GMT -5
OOC: Thanks Nadine OOC2: As Kiriu
BIC: I heard, that Koochie is trying to defend me, but dad's decision was always irrefutable. Later my brother want to race with me to the glade.
"Hay! This isn't fair! You are bigger than me!" I cried at him. "I want to have the advantage! You'll start, when I'll be in forest!"
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Post by kiriu on Mar 12, 2006 1:13:02 GMT -5
OOC: As Koochie
BIC: 'He wants to have advantage!' I thought. "Do you want something else?" I said. He look at me with the regret. "It was a little joke!" I explain. "All right! You are going to have a advantage, but we must tell parents, where we're going." I said. He just nodded.
We went to our parents, which rested after breakfast at the sunlight. "We're going to the glade. We'll be back soon." I said. "OK, but watch about your brother! He's just a cub!" My father said. "All right, all right..." Then I've peered at my brother. "Ready?" He nodded enthusiastically. "Three, two, one, GO!" In that moment Kiriu begin running in the way, where the glade was. When he had run into the forest, I begin running too...
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Post by kiriu on Mar 12, 2006 7:40:04 GMT -5
OOC: As Kiriu
BIC: I ran through the forest to the glade. I heard, that Koochie is right behind me. 'I don't want to lose the race!' I thought. But when I look around, my brother missed me. How he did that?!
"You were cheating!" I said, when we arrived to the glace. "I loose today, because today is my bad day."
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Post by kiriu on Mar 12, 2006 7:59:03 GMT -5
OOC: As Koochie
BIC: I was really good sprinter. Besides my brother was smaller than me. Without any problems I missed him and started leading in race. Of course I was first at the finish. In the time, when I was resting after race, Kiriu said that I was cheating.
"It's not true and you know that." I said. "The only reason, that I won is the fact... I'm better than you!" I said and started laughing.
OOC: As Kiriu
BIC: "Ha, ha, ha! Very funny! What shall we do now?" I asked Koochie. Then he said, that he don't know. 'If you don't know, so why came we here?' I thought. "Let's go exploring!" I said. He looks like he had heard the worst idea in the world. "C'mon Koochie, it will be cool!"
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Post by kiriu on Mar 12, 2006 12:39:26 GMT -5
OOC: As Koochie
BIC: "Exploring? This is absurd!" I said. Then he has said, that will be cool. "All right, all right, lets go, but we must come back to mom and dad. They will be worrying, that something bad has become to us." He just nodded.
When we went into the forest at the left side of glade I felt an unfamiliar scent. The scent was stronger at the place, where we went. I've stopped my brother and I said: "Hide into the bushes Kiriu!" He has protested, but I was responsible for him. "I said, that you must hide into the bushes!" With a little confusion he went there, where I told him to hide.
As Kiriu hid himself I went to the place, where the scent was the strongest. And then I saw a... "Hunters! Many of them!" I cried. "Oh no, I must take care of Kiriu!" But there was no little cub in the bushes. 'He goes to parents. I must catch him up!' I thought. Then I ran to the place where was mom and dad and probably Kiriu. In the middle of way I saw my little brother. When I was just a couple of steps behind him, he stopped. I stopped t0o and I felt the same scent again. I took Kiriu and hid behind a big stone. We peeked out of stone and saw, that our parents has been attacked by eight or nine hunters. Dad was fighting very well with 5 of them. My mother wasn't so good in fight as dad was.
"We must help them!" Cries Kiriu. "No! We can't! I am responsible for you! I can't allow to hurt you!" I said.
In that moment we heard big roar. That, what we saw... that was terrible. My mom was laing on the ground with the bleeding wound. Three hunters came nearby her and... I couldn't say anything. She was dead, my mother was dead!! I watched at my dad. He was really mad. Now he fight with seven hunters. He impacted two of them, but he has revealed his back and suddenly he has four spears in his back. He cried in his unimaginable pain. He stood like this just a moment and fell off into the river. The river became a red color of blood. I can't believe, that my parents was dead. At this moment I want to kill all of the humans in the world, but I must take care of Kiriu. I looked at him. He was weeped. "Kiriu... I... I don't know what to say... I don't even know what to do. I... " I said with accusation. "C'mon. We must get out of here quickly."
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Post by kiriu on Mar 12, 2006 14:43:03 GMT -5
OOC: As Kiriu again. Oh man! Boring here! I must end that memories and go to the present!
BIC: "Yay! We go to the forest on the left! There must be something interesting out there!" I said when Koochie agreed to exploring. When we entered the forest my brother stopped me with his pow. I have looked at him and realize, that he sniffed something. I have sniffed too and I smelt some scent. When I want to discover the source of scent I heard my brother voice: "Hide into the bushes Kiriu!" "But Koochie! This is unfamiliar scent! I want just discover..." "I said, that you must hide into the bushes!" He cried at me.
I was confused, but I hide in the bushes. Meanwhile I were hiding, my brother goes to the way of source of the scent. Then I heard the worst information. There were hunters. Many of them! 'Mom, dad! They don't know!' I thought. I ran out of bushes and started ran to the river, where my parents was.
In the end of the way I smelt the same scent, that I felt in forest. There are humans somewhere here. When I was thinking, my brother join me. He must sniffed this scent too, because he took me behind big stone. I don't know why we are hiding. Then I and Koochie peeked out of stone and saw the battle. My dad fight with five of hunters, and mom takes care of the rest. "We must help them!" I cried, but Koochie said no. He said also he is responsible for me.
Then we heard roar. It was my mom! I have peeked the stone again and saw her falling on the ground with very bleeding wound. "NOOOOOOOOOO! PLEASE NO!" I cried, but nobody without Koochie heard that. And then I saw, that three hunters are coming to my mother and then... Their spears were dripped with my mothers blood. When dad saw this, he became really mad. One against seven hunters. He attack two of them with his pow, but he didn't to fast to take care of rest. I closed my eyes and I prayed to Great Spirits, that my father became alive from this battle. But when I had open my eyes I saw my dad falling to the river with four spears in his back. I realized, that I don't have parents no more. I just sit down and started weeping. My brother has trying to help me, but the pain was too strong.
'I saw death of my parents.' I thought. 'What will be with me and Koochie?' Then I heard that Koochie was telling me something. "Kiriu... I... I don't know what to say... I don't even know what to do. I... " He said with accusation. I wanted to say him, but I couldn't. The pain, this nightmare... it was too much for a cub just like me. "C'mon. We must get out of here quickly." Said Koochie.
OOC2: This is everything for today. Tomorrow I'll post here the rest of Kiriu's memories and then we will take a job under the present (I mean the time, when Kenai and Koda are going to the Salmon Run second time together).
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Post by nadine on Mar 12, 2006 17:47:38 GMT -5
Wow, great job Kiriu. You're doing really great pal.
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Post by kiriu on Mar 13, 2006 10:35:12 GMT -5
OOC: Thanks Nadine. If you want to join in here, just wait until I end with Kiriu's memories. Oh man! I'll end the memories later. I couldn't invent nothing today . Hmm... But it will be all right!
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Post by nadine on Mar 13, 2006 19:44:13 GMT -5
Maybe its best for you to take a break for a while Kiriu, you've been working up too much about your character's flashbacks and stuff.
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Post by kiriu on Mar 14, 2006 8:56:02 GMT -5
Yeah. I think this is the best idea. Besides I'm working over my own forum. I will post next epizode in friday, saturday or sunday.
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Post by kiriu on Mar 16, 2006 14:27:46 GMT -5
All right! Tommorow is the big day! I make the end of Kiriu's memories. I worked at it since Tuesday. But I think, that this is good. BTW thanks Nadine. Only you read this boooooooooooooring RP. I think, that wasn't good idea to start that RP . But... I've started it. So I must role this to the end. I will do my best!
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Post by nadine on Mar 16, 2006 16:57:32 GMT -5
Okay good. So far the story is going pretty well and I'm gonna roleplay Kenai as soon as you're done with Kiriu's story. And I think I'll roleplay Koda too also.
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Post by kiriu on Mar 17, 2006 5:07:11 GMT -5
All tight! Thanks Nadine!
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