Truttle's Polar North Adventure Comic and art!

[Truttle]

For those new here. You may or may not have read my story “Truttle’s Polar North Adventure”. Well for those who are interested. You might not know that there are two long posts that got mixed into the “Life with Koda” roleplay. Those posts belong to the story but I don’t think I can redirect them there so I’ve added the entire story in my DeviantArt account. Check it out for views on my art. I’ve also begun making a visual comic of that story so you can see what’s happening in the story. Please feel free to offer any kind of tips, advice, or comments. It will be highly appreciated and taken into consideration to help me improve on my works.

The link is: truttle.deviantart.com/

[EbonyPatriot]

Great Truttle! I love your way of drawing bears- great style. The only thing I can really sugest is to possibly make the lines darker (they're er kinda hard to see). But even at that, your cmoics are great. *Wags tail*

Live long and prosper.
-EbonyPatriot

[Nikiski]

Yeah, Truttle, I meant to post this earlier but I forgot!

Anyways, great work, and I can't wait to see more! May be use a black pen to trace your sketch on another piece of paper will make the picture clearer!

[Truttle]

Thank you so much guy's! I'll work with your ideas and try to make my drawings better.