The Fire That Started it All

[Kia]

Kia woke up to the smell of fire. She looked outside and fire was coming her way! She ran as fast as I could but her parents disapeared. She reached a river and stoped at the other side. When the fire was over all of her home and suroundings were gone! She started walking to find a new home. Because of that fire her life changed forever. When it was dark she laid down and went to sleep. In the midle of the night a big bear started charging right at her when someone scared it off she looked and it was...
Simba see a big bear charging at a cub. He made a big shadow that scares the bear away. He says,"Cub are you ok? What are you doing here? That bear will kill anyone on his property you shouldn't be here! If you don't have a place to stay you can stay at my cave." He smiles at her.
"I am ok. Thanks for letting me stay at your cave! My home got destroyed by a fire, and I got separated from my parents because of it." Kia says as her ears droop and they start going to Siba's cave. "So what is you name? My name is Kia." Kia says.
"Your welcome! I am sorry about your parents. My name is Simba." Simba says as thay arive at Simba's cave and thay go to sleep. Simba says,"Night Kia!"
"Night Simba!" Kia says as she go to sleep. When Kia wakes up she go outside and watches the sunrise. Simba comes and joins her. After thay go catch some fish. Kia says,"So now what? Do you want to climb some trees? She asks.
"Ok lets climb trees!" Simba says. They start climbing trees. Thay do that until Thay get hungery. They go catch some fish.
"Lets go find your parents!" Simba says. As thay start walking. When they arive at Kia's old home Simba says,"Wow! It really did something!" They try to find Kia's parent's sent, but it is covered by the scent of smoke and burntness. Kia looks disapointed so Simba says,"Kia we can't and won't give up!" Thay keep serching.
Thay seach for a while until Kia pick up their scent. When thay find them they are dead! Kia starts to cry. Simba hugs her and says,"Kia I will take care of you! It will be all right!" Thay head back to Simba's cave when a hunter come and shoots Simba. He corners Kia, but a big bear comes and scares him away he says,"Are you ok kid? Did you know the bear that hunter killed?" She aswers,"I am ok and that bear was my friend and gardian. Now I am all alone in this world!" She starts to cry. The bear says,"I can be you gardian now! My name is Kovu! What is yours?" She answers,"Thanks! And my name is Kia!" Thay head to Kovu's cave. When thay get there Kia says,"Kovu you are the onlyone in my life now! But I am glad you are here!" She smiles at him. She then tells him her life story.

[Kirchy]

Is that all? If it is, you might want to add another chapter or two.

[Kia]

Koda was climbing a tree when he saw a bear cub and an older bear walking under it. I climb down the tree and pad over to them."Hello!" He greets them."Who are you guys?"
A cub comes over to Kia and Kovu says,"Hi guys!" Kia answers,"Hi my name is Kia. And that bear is Kovu." I point to Kovu.
The cub tells me her name is Kia and the bear is Koda. "Hello!" Koda says. "My name is Koda. Come on say it with me Ko-da!"
"What do you want Ko-daaaaa!" Kia asks.
Kovu rolls his eyes. "I want to play. Are you hungry? Want to climb trees? Want to eat? Want to swim? Want to play tag? Want to hear a story?!" he starts jumping up and down excidetly.
Koda stops jumping and looks at Kia confused. "Why not?" He asks with a concerned tone.
"She has lost her parents. She is very sad. You should leave her alone or she will atack. And don't talk about it around her." Kovu tells Koda.
"Oh!," Koda turns to Kia."But you still need friends. You can't go on without them. Every cub needs friends. And you aren't going to get any if you chase them all away."
Kovu growls at Koda.
Koda gulps and steps back. "Stay back! I've got a brother. And he's huge!" He looks around then shouts,"Kenai!"
Kovu says,"Well just go away please before Kia gets mad! She can hurt you really bad. So please go!"

[Kia]

"Fine! But when you are all alone and don't have any friends, don't come crying to me!" Koda says to Kia with tears in his eyes. He grummbles and runs away. Then he sighs sadly. He had no friends. Kenai was the only one he had. There where no other cubs around there. But when he saw Kia He thought he would finally have a friend. He was wrong. "Who needs a friend like Kia anyway? I don't"

[Kia]

Kia growls. She wamts friends but they will just die like Simba and her parents. Simba is the only one she has!