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Post by Karion on May 11, 2007 13:53:02 GMT -5
Who said it won't have Kenai?
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Post by Karion on May 11, 2007 16:23:58 GMT -5
Here is some of the next part...for now...
Chapter 3: Afterwards Nita decided to talk with Denahi to help ease each others pain. She found him standing by the lake near the village. Denahi turned around startled when he heard her coming, but relaxed when he realized it was just her. "Oh, hi Nita. What's wrong," he asked. "Nothing," she replied "I just needed to talk to someone." "At least I know there is someone else out there who is feeling the same amount of pain, possibly more, as me right now," Denahi said. "What do you thinking was going through his mind during his last moments," Nita asked calmly. Even though she seemed to be fine, she was acing on the inside with pain. "He was probably seeing his life flash before his eyes. So what are you going to do now that your husband is dead," Denahi asked. "Well he told me to look after Koda. So I guess I'll stay a bear and watch over Koda," she replied. "I guess he's up with the great spirits and Sitka," said Denahi. "And mine and Koda's mother," Nita said. *** Kenai then awoke. "What the....Where am I," he seemed to ask himself. All he saw were a blend of lights, lights and of course, more lights. He then heard a familiar voice speak to him. "You are a spirit Kenai," the vocie said. "Who said that," Kenai called out. Then a figure materialized in front of him...it was Sitka. “Sitka,” Kenai said in a hushed voice. “Kenai, you died but you led a kind life, for that reason you have become a great spirit,” Sitka said. “Well what do I do now? I mean since I’m dead there’s nothing do, right,” Kenai asked. “Wrong. There is an event taking place in which we need to intervene upon,” Sitka replied. “What event,” Kenai asked. “An event caused by the one that killed you,” Sitka replied,” The other spirits and I have discussed it and we think that it is unfair that you died the way you did. So we will give you the chance to come back to live. But at the same time something else in the real world is going on that needs to be stopped. Atka has hijacked Nita’s village and is holding it hostage until Nita marries him.” “That ungrateful loser,” Kenai said angrily. “But there are some things we have to take care of,” Sitka said, “We have to get Nita and small group to take care of what is going on in her village. But while you’re here you can bring in one other person or animal from the other realm to help you. Who do you choose?” “For the person or animal to help me I choose Koda. And to help Nita I choose Karion, Nadine and Midnight.
Finished this chapter...so..yeah. Sorry this one was so short, the next one will be longer. Working on next one right now.
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Post by nadine on May 11, 2007 22:10:03 GMT -5
Oooooh interesting. I wonder if Kenai is gonna go back to the real world again if Sitka lets him, but I probably shouldn't be asking that. Might give away too many spoilers
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Post by Karion on May 11, 2007 23:32:05 GMT -5
Your pretty smart with that...Nadine.
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Post by nadine on May 12, 2007 21:46:01 GMT -5
I am? Oh.....I guess I am. Heh ;D
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Post by Karion on May 13, 2007 17:19:20 GMT -5
Yep....still working on chapter 3 so don't you worry.
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Post by nadine on May 13, 2007 21:51:54 GMT -5
Okay
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Post by Karion on May 16, 2007 20:51:18 GMT -5
Chapter 4 done!!!! Here it is:
Chapter 4: “Ahhhhhh!!!” “What is it, Denahi,” asked Nita. “The spirits are trying to communicate, there pretty much screaming in my head,” he replied. “What should we do,” asked Nita in a worried voice. “Get to my tent,” he replied. He struggled to get to the tent for a while, but when he got there he was doing a little bit better. “Okay now let’s see what there trying to say.” Denahi then wove an item across a type of table called a mesa and the next thing to happen was shocking. Kenai began to materialize in the tent. “Where’s Koda,” he asked. “I’ll get him,” Nita said and then ran out of the tent. “Kenai,” Denahi said in a confused voice. “Man she is taking a long time. Oh hey, Denahi! Don’t get rid of my body I’ll need it,” said Kenai. “Why,” he asked. “I’ll explain when everyone is here,” Kenai replied. Soon Nita came running back with Koda, Kacie and Karion. “Man, what the heck,” Karion said in a confused voice. “Oh good, you’re here to,” Kenai said. “What’s going on Kenai,” Denahi asked in a annoyed voice. “I have a chance to come back to live but I need someone’s help. Koda, will you help me in the spiritual realm,” Kenai asked. “Sure,” Koda replied. “Also, Nita’s village has been taken over by Atka. So Nita is going to go with a small group to try and stop him. It will consist of Nita, Karion…” Kenai started to say but was cut off by Kacie. “Can I go to,” she asked excitedly. “It’s up to Karion,” he replied. “Sure,” Karion said. “Well who else is going? This is a pretty small group,” Nita said. “The other two going are Midnight and Nadine,” Kenai said. *** At the Salmon Run, Nadine and Midnight were talking together. “Did you hear that Kenai was killed by a hunter,” Midnight asked. “Yeah, it just really makes me mad and sad,” she replied. “I wonder how Koda is doing,” Kimba said. “I just don’t hope that Nita comes home with some big ‘ol sob story about how she tried to save him, but couldn’t do it in time. It was probably her fault anyways,” Nadine said angrily. “You still have a grudge against her, don’t you,” Midnight asked. “OF COURSE I DO! HOW COULD YOU NOT TELL!? I LOVED KENAI! GOD I HATE NITA” Nadine screamed angrily. “I’ll stop asking questions now,” Midnight replied. “What did you say!?” “Nothing.” It was about that moment that Nita walked up to them with Karion and Kacie close behind. “ And here’s the witch now,” Nadine said directly at Nita. “We don’t have time for this Nadine. I know that you hate me, but bigger things are going on right now,” Nita said. “Oh what is more important than Kenai being dead,” Nadine asked angrily. “Where’s Koda,” Kimba asked in a worried voice. “Let me guess, you killed him too. Didn’t you,” Nadine asked. “No I didn’t,” Nita said. “Then where is he?! Did you abandon him in the forest,” Nadine asked. “No! He’s in the spirit realm with Kenai, trying to bring Kenai back to life. And Kenai brought him in there on his own. And Koda said he would go with him,” Nita said in an angry fury. “Well why didn’t you just say so? Now what’s so important,” Nadine asked. “We need to go save my village from Atka,” Nita said. “Kenai has a chance at coming back to life and all you can think about is saving your village!? What is wrong with you,” Nadine asked. “Kenai said that the spirits needed to intervene but he sent us to go. He specifically said that the group going was you, me, Karion, Midnight, and Kacie,” Nita said. “Sweet,” Midnight said out loud. “Well…what about Kimba,” Nadine asked in a concerned voice. “He said that was your choice,” Nita replied. “What do you say Kimba? You want to go,” Nadine asked. “Sure,” Kimba replied. “I’ll go, but only because Kenai requested it. But I’m not taking any orders from you,” Nadine said sternly to Nita. “That’s okay, because Karion was placed in charge by Kenai for some odd reason,” Nita said. “I know why,” Karion said. “You do,” Midnight asked. “Yeah. It’s because I’m his biological brother,” Karion replied. *** Karion was with the others in Denahi’s tent just when they were leaving when Kenai told everyone to leave but him. After everyone left Kenai began to tell him. “Karion. I learned something while I was here,” he said. “What,” Karion asked. “You are my brother.” “How!?” “As it turns out just before our parents died, they had another kid. You. They didn’t tell anyone except for Tanana. She didn’t tell anyone and decided to make it seem as though she had found you in the woods and had decided to take care of you. But we are brothers you and I. I know the pain you have experienced growing up, not having your parents around. It’s hard. But I want you to forgive me for all the times I picked on you, it was really to channel my anger and grieve.” “I forgive you, bro.” *** “That’s how I found out.” “Oh...my…god,” Nadine said. “That was sort of…well…random,” Midnight said. “I know it’s sort of weird, but that’s why he placed me in charge,” Karion said. “Well I can work with that. But the only reason I’m going is because Kenai requested that I go,” Nadine said. “When do we leave,” Midnight asked. “Now,” Karion replied.
Tell me what you think. Hope you like it Midnight and Nadine!
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Post by nadine on May 17, 2007 0:04:02 GMT -5
Oh my god, that's a cool chapter. When you ask me for permisson if me and Kimba were going to be one of your fanfics, I didn't think it was gonna be the same one you're still writing up. I can't wait to see how the rest goes. I'm already picturing myself hating Nita's guts now. This is gonna be a very cool fanfic, I just know it! ;D
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Post by Karion on May 17, 2007 9:28:40 GMT -5
Oh it'll get better...
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Post by nadine on May 17, 2007 21:17:38 GMT -5
As Elliot would say in Open Season......."SWEET!"
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Post by Karion on May 18, 2007 14:06:48 GMT -5
Still working on it. Maybe it'll be up tonight...
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Post by nadine on May 18, 2007 18:45:29 GMT -5
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Post by Karion on May 19, 2007 11:37:18 GMT -5
Here it is Nadine. It has "Transformation" sung by Phil Collins (but only part of it.) Chapter 5...
Chapter 5: “Just shut up.” “No, you shut up!” “I don’t think bribing them will work right now,” Karion said. They had been traveling for 3 hours. Besides the fact that it was a long journey. Nadine and Nita, who basically hate each other entirely, had to be with each other the whole trip. Karion and Midnight were getting ready to jump off a cliff, Nita and Nadine were getting ready to kill each other and Kimba was chasing a butter fly. Karion had just about had it. “Okay! We’re going to stop for the day and rest because it’ll be sunset soon. So we should get some rest and head out early tomorrow. And maybe you two will be able to get along for a bit,” Karion yelled. “You sound mad,” Nita said. “I am at the way you two are acting so immature,” he replied. They soon stopped and found an empty opening to sleep in. They soon turned for the night and went to sleep. Nita slept away from most of the group. Karion had a bit of trouble sleeping, but he eventually feel asleep. That night he dreamed about his coming of age ceremony he had had before he became a bear. *** It was a bright and cheerful day for Karion. It was his coming of age ceremony. He had finished all his chores and worked hard that day and hoped to get a good totem. He really loved bears, so he had hoped to get that totem. Several hours later, he was sitting in front of Tanana, in front of the whole village waiting to receive his totem. “Please be bear, please be bear,” he thought. “Your totem is love Karion,” Tanana said, revealing a bear totem. “Sweet! The weird thing is just what I wanted,” Karion said excitedly. Later that day he was heading back to his tent when he saw Denahi. He decided to talk to him and see how he was doing. “How’s it going Denahi?” “Oh, hi Karion. I’m doing good. I see you got your totem today.” “Yeah. It’s awesome. I think bears are awesome.” “That reminds me of Kenai. He got the exact same totem.” “Oh yeah! I remember that.” “Well he’s a bear now, so I don’t see him much.” “That’s too bad….Well, I’ll see you later then.” “See ya, Karion.” Karion then awoke from his dream. It was only an hour later. “This is going to be a long night,” he said. *** At the time the group was sleeping, Kenai and Koda were about to begin the journey the journey. Sitka was explaining what would happen. “You are going to go on the hardest journey of your life. It will be filled with ups and downs. And you will confront what you hope you would never want to do,” he said, “If you can make it through, then you’ll be able to return to life.” “So when do we start,” Kenai asked. “Now.” Everything changed into a swirl of colors and an image of Karion appeared. A voice from nowhere started speaking. “You have already passed the first part by asking for forgiveness from Karion. Now we will begin the next part of your journey,” It said. The image of Karion then vanished and a scene Kenai hoped to never see again appeared. It was like watching a movie play. It was the fight on the glacier. "No. I don't want to see it," he said. "What is it," Koda asked. "It was when Sitka died," he replied. Come with me, I’ll take you now, To a place that you fear. For no reason why, Your heart has turned away from me, And I will make you understand. The fight with Koda’s mother began. “Mom,” Koda said in disbelief. It continued on until Sitka feel into the water and died and Koda’s mother ran off. “Make it stop! Make it stop,” Kenai screamed. Everything will become clear to you, When you see things through, another’s eyes, Everything will become clear to you, Whatever’s meant for you, You will find, “All Sitka wanted to do was protect you and Denahi. He made the ice collapse and purposely let himself die to save you,” the voice continued. “Make it stop,” Kenai screamed at the top of his lungs. And then suddenly everything stopped and a new image appeared. It was when Kenai was chasing Koda’s mother about to kill her.
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Post by nadine on May 21, 2007 21:02:05 GMT -5
HAHA!! Oh god...I like the shutting up part in the beginning. It reminds me of this one clip I saw of the new film Pirates of the Caribbean: At World's End where Jack and Barbossa are in a fight on whom's the captain and they're all like "What are you doing?" "No, what are YOU doing?!" LOL, I'm so enjoying every last part of it XD
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