Oreius

[Blaise Zebrataur]

This is my character that I rp with all the time and he is a centaur.

He was 6'4" and seem to be quite old.From the waist up,he was human.Haveing long black hair and a black goatee on his chin.His ears was pointed abit,like elf ears.He had a six-pack abs that where covered by his horse fur that began at his human stomach.And worked down as it was as black as night,as it covered his entire horse body.His tail was long as it almost reached the ground and his rear left hoof was the only thing not black,as it was a white as snow.

[Blaise Zebrataur]

I guess no replies,I'll lock it.

[Blaise Zebrataur]

Anyone at all have anything to say?

[czarine]

I guess not, no. I think your description is rather clear, I have nothing to add, no remarks...

[Epesi]

I never thought it was necessary to comment on character profiles, really. These threads are more for reference than discussion. If you're looking for advice or input, you could just say so, but that sort of thing might be better suited to the "Roleplay Discussion" forum.

You should probably follow the layout provided in the sticky thread right at the top of the list to make things more clear. Like I said, the point of these character introduction threads is just that: to give people a quick introduction to who and what your character is. It doesn't have to (and probably shouldn't) be written in prose; we're not telling stories here, just laying down the facts.

Also, all you have right now is a description of the character's physical appearance. Some details about his personality and background would be nice. Think of it as a job interview -- the interviewer isn't going to just sit there looking at you, they're going to ask questions. Tell us who the character is, not just what he looks like.

Aside from those tips, I don't really know what to say about the character...he's from The Chronicles of Narnia, so he's not really your creation.

[Blaise Zebrataur]

I understand..