Sialuk
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Post by Sialuk on Mar 5, 2008 20:30:53 GMT -5
Name=Sialuk Species=Grizzly Bear Gender=Female Age=4(in bear years) Personallity=Ava'luk is shy to new people, but warms up eventually.She is a bear with a positive attitude towards life.She is also mischevious.She will share her territory if she knows it will be taken care of.She loves other animals.She is very kind and cares about all the other animals. Bio=She is from Kenai's tribe .She turned into a bear because she really loves them.. Description=She looks like this  |
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Remmus
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I love his expression!
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Post by Remmus on Mar 7, 2008 21:03:16 GMT -5
Sorry about the late reply (Very busy as of late  ). You've got a good character idea and a picture to boot. I would like to more about her past though  , like what tribe or place she came from. Otherwise it's good  . |
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Post by Ken'ichi on Mar 7, 2008 22:45:40 GMT -5
She sounds like a good character. Love that bear picture. Looks very fluffy X3
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Striper
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Post by Striper on Mar 7, 2008 23:07:42 GMT -5
Yeah I was thinking the same thing as Keni there. Fluffiest looking bear I've ever seen. Definitely looks huggable! Sounds like a good all-round, versatile character to me. Definitely worth developing. ^^
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Sialuk
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Post by Sialuk on May 28, 2008 19:24:07 GMT -5
Thanks guys!  |
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Post by Koedi on Jun 7, 2008 12:45:49 GMT -5
Very cute ^_^ I'd love to RP with her =3
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Sialuk
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Post by Sialuk on Jun 7, 2008 14:08:55 GMT -5
I just made a RP in the original rp thread.
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Sialuk
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Post by Sialuk on Jun 8, 2008 2:08:40 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300][shadow=red,left,300]EDIT:
I AM GOING TO CHANE MY BEAR PICTURE.[/shadow][/glow]
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Post by Koedi on Jun 11, 2008 19:45:34 GMT -5
Your bear picture looks very nice . ^_^ I really like it.
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Post by Epesi on Jun 11, 2008 19:56:42 GMT -5
Well, for a bit of constructive criticism, the personality seems a little bland. All it really says is that she's nice and a little shy, which doesn't make for a very interesting character. Also, her bio lacks detail, and turning into a bear just because she likes them doesn't seem very believable; one doesn't leave their whole life behind for no reason, and as Tanana said the spirits don't normally transform people in that way.
No offense meant, just trying to be helpful. :3 I love the name, by the way. I hope this one sticks. XD
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). You've got a good character idea and a picture to boot. I would like to more about her past though 
, like what tribe or place she came from. Otherwise it's good 
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