Brother Bear 2 and 1/2: After the Wedding

[Karion]

Well I'm sort of doing this from school ( ), but I'll be making a story of what I think happens after the wedding for the new family of Kenai(has to be said first), Koda( has to be said second), and Nita. Tell me what you think once it's up.

[Karion]

It was night in the forest. The only sounds that could anyone could hear were the sounds of night. Nita was staring up to the mountain where the lights touch the earth. She felt so alone from some reason. Which was odd seeing how her husband( Kenai) and Koda were just inside the cave sound asleep.
Everything seemed so different now that she was a bear. Now most of the time she was on four legs instead of two. She was thinking of what the new day would bring with Kenai teaching her how to act more like a bear. It was at that moment when she heard someone coming up behind her. She jumped up quickly in suprise to realize it was just Koda who was having trouble sleeping.
"Oh, hi Koda. You scared me there for a moment."
"Hi Nita. Whatca doin' up this late."
"I was having trouble sleeping. What are you doing up?"
"Same as you.Whenever I have trouble sleeping I watch the light rainbows."
"Me too. I try to look for my mom."
"Me too."
"Whatever happened to your mom?"
"I don't really want to talk about it."
"Oh. Sorry."
"It's okay. So how does it feel being a bear?"
"Well it feels a bit weird at first to turn into a bear . But I'll get use to it"
"I think we should go back to sleep. I've got alot planned tomorrow."
"Your probably right. Goodnight, Koda"
"Goodnight, Nita.... I have a question Nita."
"What is it Koda?"
"Can I sleep by you. Kenai is talking in his sleep again."
"Sure buddy."




I'm sorry I edited this a bunch of times. Tell me what you think of it so far( Please "bear" with me, I should be grounded, I'm lucky to even be on here!)

[Karion]

It was about noon the next day when Nita finally woke up. When she looked around at where she was. She was confused. Nobody was there and she was in the woods. She got up and started calling for Kenai and Koda. She kept looking but it was as though nobody was alive except for her. She kept on walking until she found the Salmon Run. No bears were there. She began running to her village that her father was the leader of. When she arrived everyone was gone. She began to look around in the village. She finally came to the tent in which she used to live in. She went inside and then she saw it.
It was a dead bear. She saw that it was a female bear that was sort of old. Fortunately it wasn't Kenai. All she could tell about the bear was how it died. By a spear...
Nita then awoke in her cave in a cold sweat.
* * *
"Kenai, I'm scared. I had a big dream," said Nita.
(For those of you who don't know what a big dream is it is a vision that shamans belevie in, in the practice of shamanism. Which is Kenai, Nita and Koda's religion in the Brother Bear story.)
"Oh boy.What about?" Said Kenai.
"I couldn't find you, Koda or any bears at all. So I went to my old vilage which was deserted for some reason. And in my old tent there was an old female bear who had been stabbed with a spear," said Nita in a scared voice.
"Wait! Did the bear seem be a mother?" said Kenai.
"I guess," said Nita.
"Oh boy."
"What?"
"I think you saw Koda's mother." said Kenai.
"What?"
"It's a long story."
"Well...we have a long time."
Kenai proceded to tel the story of how he kiled Koda's mother and the whole reason he was a bear.
"That was so kind of you to do for Koda!"
"But you can't tell any of the other bears at the run! Got it?"
"Fine."

Later at the Salmon Run. Koda was off with Bucky. While Nita and Kenai were talking with Tug and Karion.
"So how does it feel having a human wife, Kenai?" said Tug.
"Yeah, was she a bear, than a human, than a bear again?" asked Karion
"Well, actually Kena..." began Nita. But she was cut off when Kenai put his paw over her mouth to keep her quiet.
"That's exactlly what happened, Karion. Now will you excuse us?" said Kenai nevously. Then he quickly rushed Nita to a queit area with no other bears around.
"What did I say before?"
"I'm sorry."
"You know how complicating it would be to tell the guys."
"I said I was sorry! Jeez!"

[Karion]

Later that day Nita, Kenai and Koda were heading home for the day. That was until Karion stopped them.
"I need to talk to Kenai for a moment," he said.
"You guys head home I'll catch up to you," said Kenai.
"Okay. See ya later, Kenai," said Koda.
Karion took Kenai to an isolated area.
"Can you hurry this up, Karion ?"
"I need to ask you when you going to tell them?"
"Tell who? What?"
"Tell the other bears that your a human and your a bear because you killed Koda's mother."
"What!? How did you find out!? Did Nita tell you?"
"Oh, no. Of course not. Your wife is too nice to tell anyone. I'm human myself, I know because I'm from your tribe. Remember me? The kid you always picked on? Didn't you realize we had the same name?"
"Well I couldn't ask. In case it was just a coincident."
"Well I'm here to pay you back for what you use to do to me. I purposely changed myself into a bear. I asked the Great Spirits to. And once I reveal to your friends what happened, I'm going to change back into a human and kill Koda and Nita and ruin your life and then you will truly have nothing."
"No!"




Please tell me what you guys think! Seriously!

[Karion]

It may be a while before the next part is up. Got alot of stuff going on.

[nadine]

Hmmmm....interesting fanfic Kenai's #1 fan. I'm not a Nita fan, but so far this is the first ever Nita fanfic we've seen on the board. Not too bad, it looks kinda good

[Karion]

Surprise!
I lied. I have it finished. Check it out:

Koda noticed something was wrong with Kenai. He barely touched his food that night and seemed to pace a whole lot. He decided to ask Kenai what had happened when he talked to Karion. Because he seemed to be really down after he had talked with him.
“Hey Kenai.”
“Hiya Koda,” said Kenai gloomily.
“What did Karion tell you?”
“It’s hard to explain.”
“Well, we got through it. Remember the time you told me about my mother?”
“Karion knows.”
“Knows what?”
“That I’m human.”
“How could he find out?
“He’s really human. I use to pick on him to impress Denahi.”
“So he turned himself into a bear?”
“Pretty much.”
“What else did he say?”
“That he would tell all the other bears, turn himself back to human and then kill you and Nita to ruin my life entirely.”
“Someone is that heartless?”
“No. Nobody is. It has to be a dark spirit possessing.”
(Note: Shamanism also believes in spirits and dark spirits and someone acts evil when they are posed by a dark spirit and can be extracted by a shaman.)
“Is there anything we can do?”
“Wait! I have an idea!”
Soon Koda was riding on Kenai’s back while he and Nita ran towards Kenai’s village. He had already filled in Nita on what was going on.
“So what’s your plan,” asked Nita.
“Well, shamans can extract dark spirits. Right?”
“Yeah.”
“Well we just get the current shaman of my village to help us on this.”
“Who would that be?”
“Well there is a new shaman in my village. Guess who it is.”
“I have no idea.”
Kenai gave a smile that stretched across his face.
“Are you serious?”
“Yep.”
They soon arrived at Kenai’s village. The villagers probably would have attacked them off the bat. But Kenai had put on his totem for the occasion. That way they could identify him.
“Hey look its Kenai,” said a villager.
“He’s with Koda and...some…other bear,” said another.
Kenai headed to his old tent. It was there where he found the new shaman of the village, Denahi.

[Karion]

“Kenai? What’s wrong,” asked Denahi.
Kenai began speaking in bear, so Denahi couldn’t understand him.
“Whoa, hold on a second, Kenai,” he said.
They headed up to the ritual area and Denahi was able to get the spirits to allow him to speak to bears, very similar to what happened to Nita at one point in time.
“Okay. Now start over please,” Denahi said.
“Remember Karion. From when we were kids?”
“You mean the one you use to pick on to get my attention.
“Yeah, him. We have reason to believe that he is posed by an evil spirit.”
“Maybe you should start from the beginning,” Denahi said.
Kenai, once again, told Denahi what had happened.
“Yeah we all sort of guessed it when he left. So you need me to extract it from him?”
“Yeah.”
“Put he’s a bear. It would be hard to get him to hold still long enough to extract it.”
“That’s where Sitka comes in.”
***
It was later in the evening when Karion was walking to where he was staying. He could have sworn that someone was following him. But the only thing he could see was an eagle flying over him. He was hoping he could pull everything off and get revenge on Kenai. But something told him deep inside that he should probably not do the kill Nita and Koda part. But something tried to push that out of his mind and get him to go back to that plan. H e stood there for a while fighting himself and it was at that moment that he saw some lights grabbing him. He tried to escape but they were rock hard. He was soon pinned down. It was about that time he saw Kenai, Nita, Denahi and Koda walking to him.
“You,” he yelled at them.
“We’re here to help you,” said Kenai.
Denahi began to walk up to him. He tried to bite at him, but another light held his mouth in place so that he couldn’t bite at them.
“Great job, Sitka,” said Denahi.
“Sitka! That no good son of a great spirit,” thought Karion angrily.
Denahi began the ritual to extract the dark spirit from Karion. Karion attempt to escape, but there was no escaping Sitka’s grip. But as Karion laid there he lost the urge to struggle and to kill Nita and Koda and ruin stuff for Kenai. Eventually, at about the time the ritual was done, he felt incredibly nice and realized the horrible thoughts and plans he had made and instantly regretted even thinking about them. Sitka let him talk, just to be safe.
“I feel better now,” said Karion.
“You sure,” asked Kenai.
“I’m pretty sure,” he replied.
“Well he didn’t lose his temper. I guess he’s safe. You can let him up, Sitka,” said Kenai.
Sitka let his lights let go of Karion. Karion got up and rubbed his sore jaw.
“Thanks guys. I needed that,” he said.
“So what are you going to do now” asked Nita.
“I think I’ll stay a bear. You know…as a punishment,” he replied.
“Put it’s not your fault. It was an evil spirit,” said Kenai.
“Yeah. But I’ve always wanted to be a bear,” said Karion. When he said this he shot a clever smile.
“I’d just like to ask you guys not to tell the other bears.”
“Just as long as you don’t tell them my secret,” replied Kenai.
“Deal. Hey can I ask you guys a favor,” asked Karion.
“What is it,” replied Nita.
“Can I stay with you guys for a bit and help and stuff. Just show how sorry I am?”
“I don’t see why not,” said Kenai, “We’ll see you later Denahi.”
“Take it easy little brother,” said Denahi as he left.
“I have to leave now as well Kenai, take it easy,” said Sitka. He then turned into an eagle and flew off. Koda then yawned.
“Can we get home? I’m getting tired” said Koda.
“Sure thing buddy,” said Kenai.



The End


This it for the story. I was really bored and it's really short.
I based Karion off of myself...sort of.
This only my first fanfiction story. But it is not my lasted. So expect more stories.

[thePwnER]

I can't read this